This is what we have so far.
This is the story so far. I started this post a few weeks ago. The point of the post was to create a story where anyone could participate in its making.
These are the characters so far:
Humans:
Ed
Sir Peter
Jepel (died in the story… doesn’t mean he cant be a ghost right? or maybe a great philosopher knows a place where its possible to revive the dead.
Trinitie
King Draginol
KarmaGirl
Weirdos:
The Mad Clown
Lizardman
Bearded woman
A. I would like to thank Jepel and Sir Peter Maxwell for their contributions.
B. Please remember that this is all written in good fun, and that none of the things written here are real. This is a fictional story.
C. Brentville is changed into Gem City for apparent reasons.
D. Feel free to post your comment at this page.
D. But If you would like to contribute to this story, please post your reply to this page: http://boogerschnot.joeuser.com/ArticleComments.asp?AID=7941
There was a sudden movement to the right of Ed. as he looked toward it he was surprised by the sight of the mad clown of Gem City. He called out suddenly to the others as he ran towards where he last saw them. He wondered why he even came to this trip. As he was running he recalled that he left some of the books that they needed to vanquish the mad clown forever. He turned back abruptly to face the clown all by himself, not caring even if the clown ate his eyeballs for a midnight snack, even if he was already scared shitless. As he was turning he realized that...
He realized that the clown wasn't alone and that several shadows were standing around. They started to move silently toward him. The clown stayed still, Ed could see that tears were flowing on his face and fading the make up. One by one, the shadows went into the light, allowing Ed to distinguish the mean small eyes staring at him. The clown shouted something in a language he couldn't understand. Suddenly, the woman with a beard, the monkey on a one-wheel bike and the lizard man rushed on him…
Ed screamed in terror as the Lizard man rushed towards him "what do you want" shouted Ed
"I am here for the money old chap" said the Lizard Man. Ed pleaded "i don’t have it, i don't have it" The Lizard Man battered Ed over the head with an iron bar demanding that Ed pays what he owes. "Have you been gambling away the money you owe peasant" said the Lizard Man. Ed replied "Sir Peter Maxwell will have his money by next Thursday"…
As he said this he was already concocting a plan where he gets to keep the money and also get revenge on the one who atarted all his problems. He realized that it was now time to let everyone know his true colors, time to let them all know who boogerschnot is. As he turned away from the lizard man, he quietly whispered to himself "i don’t care if it takes a whole lifetime to beat you my brother, i will make sure that the death of Jepel will be avenged" as he was running away he could almost remember how Jepel screamed as Sir Peter forced a flaming red hot poker up his ass. He wiped away his tears and the awful makeup that his brother made him wear. As he wiped all traces of tears and makeup, he swore that he would never let his brother's gay hands touch his face ever again. Ed was painfully awakened from his painful memories and thoughts of revenge when he suddenly realized that he was already in front of trinitie's house...
He also realised that there was something strange. The door was slightly open when he pushed it to rush in the room. The living room was a mess; furniture and objects of Trinitie were broken with pieces everywhere. Ed couldn't breath. He run into the bedroom but stopped on the doorstep to read the sign written in red blood letters above the bed: "My money first, Old Chap". Ed sat on the bed, one part of his plan fell apart. He needed to rethink it, but the death and the pain that he has been through the last month start to haunt his mind with the same questions
Has everything start with the departure of the king Draginol the first? Why did he need to go in crusade to defeat the Scandinavian penguins? How did they let Sir Peter control the city? Now it was too late... or may be not?
He reread note left behind by Sir Peter. He has now lost one of the most powerful allies with the sudden disappearance of trinitie. What happened to her he asked himself silently as he clutched the note in his fist? As he was sitting in the bed he heard a quiet wailing in the kitchen. He ran downstairs in the hope that maybe trinitie was the one he was hearing.
As he entered the kitchen he saw the sister of trinitie. Karmagirl was crouching on the floor with her arm hanging limp by her side. Ed quickly ran toward her and carried her toward the couch in the living room. He finally saw what was wrong with her arm, it was dislocated at the shoulder. As he tried to set it back in place he quietly asked himself why Lord Draginol left Sir Peter in charge of Gem City…