Lets make this Work (story without end)

lets see if this will even start.

Published on February 17, 2004 By EFalgui In Misc

This is a simple kind of game with a few simple rules.

HOW IT WORKS:

i make a paragraph about anything then you keep adding adding to it. every reply is a new chapter and thats what you are supposed to reply to next. the goal is to make the story as long as possible.you can use any name as long as you are not "too" insulting. simple isnt it?

There was a sudden movement to the right of Ed. as he looked toward it he was suprised by the sight of the mad clown of brentville. he called out suddenly to the others as he ran towards where he last saw them. he wondered why he even came to this trip. as he was running he recalled that he left some of the books that they needed to vanquish the mad clown forever. he turned back abruptly to face the clown all by himself, not caring even if the clown ate his eyeballs for a midnight snack, even if he was already scared shitless. as he was turning he realized that...

Ok guys its your turn to make this work. Feel free to add your own part to this story. there is a lot more room for other characters, your imagination is the only limit.

Comments

JEPEL

on Feb 17, 2004

I give a go. Can be funny. Hope you going to like it

He realise that the clown wasn't alone, several shadows were standing around. They started to move silently toward him. The clown stayed still, Ed could see that tears were flowing on his face and fading the make up. One by one, the shadows went into the light, allowing Ed to distinguish the mean small eyes staring at him. The clown shouted something in a langage he couldn't understand. Suddenly, the woman with a beard, the monkey on a one-weel bike and the lizard man rushed on him.

JEPEL

on Feb 17, 2004

I give a go. Can be funny. Hope you going to like it

He realised that the clown wasn't alone, several shadows were standing around. They started to move silently toward him. The clown stayed still, Ed could see that tears were flowing on his face and fading the make up. One by one, the shadows went into the light, allowing Ed to distinguish the mean small eyes staring at him. The clown shouted something in a langage he couldn't understand. Suddenly, the woman with a beard, the monkey on a one-weel bike and the lizard man rushed on him.

Sir Peter Maxwell

on Feb 19, 2004

Ed screamed in terror as the Lizard man rushed towards him "what do you want" shouted Ed

"I am here for the money old chap" said the Lizard Man. Ed pleaded "i dont have it, i don't have it" The Lizard Man battered Ed over the head with an iron bar demanding that Ed pays what he owes. "have you been gambling away the money you owe peasant" said the Lizard Man. Ed replied "Sir Peter Maxwell will have his money by next Thursday"

EFalgui

on Feb 22, 2004

As he said this he was already concocting a plan where he gets to keep the money and also get revenge on the one who atarted all his problems. He realized that it was now time to let everyone know his true colors, time to let them all know who boogerschnot is. as he turned away from the lizard man, he quietly whispered to himself "i dont care if it takes a whole lifetime to beat you my brother, i will make sure that the death of Jepel will be avenged" as he was running away he could almost remember how Jepel screamed as Sir Peter forced a flaming red hot poker up his ass. he wiped away his tears and the awful makeup that his brother made him wear. as he wiped all traces of tears and makeup, he swore that he would never let his brother's gay hands touch his face ever again. ed was painfully awakened from his painful memories and thoughs of revenge when he suddenly realized that he was already in front of trinitie's house...

EFalgui

on Feb 22, 2004

JEPEL

on Feb 23, 2004

He also realised that there was something strange. The door was slightly open when he pushed it to rush in the room. The living room was a mess, furniture and objects of Trinitie were broken with pieces everywhere. Ed couldn't breath. He run into the bedroom but stopped on the doorstep to read the sign written in red blood letters above the bed: "My money first, Old Chap". Ed sat on the bed, one part of his plan fell apart. He needed to rethink it, but the death and the pain that he has been through the last month start to haunt his mind with the same questions
Has everything start with the departure of the king Draginol the first? Why did he need to go in crusade to defeat the Scandinavian penguins? How did they let Sir Peter control the city? Now it was too late... or may be not?

EFalgui

on Feb 23, 2004

(hmm, more and more people are gitting added to the character list)

He reread note left behind by Sir Peter. He has now lost one of the most powerful allies with the sudden disappearance of trinitie. What happened to her he asked himself silently as he clutched the note in his fist? As he was sitting in the bed he heard a quiet wailing in the kitchen. He ran downstairs in the hope that maybe trinitie was the one he was hearing.

As he entered the kitchen he saw the sister of trinitie. Karmagirl was crouching on the floor with her arm hanging limp by her side. Ed quickly ran toward her and carried her toward the couch in the living room. He finally saw what was wrong with her arm, it was dislocated at the shoulder. As he tried to set it back in place he quietly asked himself why Lord Draginol left Sir Peter in charge of Gem City.

EFalgui

on Feb 27, 2004

Reply By: JEPEL Posted: Tuesday, February 24, 2004

Karma Girl tried to speak but just couldn't articulate, her breath was choppy and Ed with her dangling elbow in his hands could imagine clearly why. He put a piece of wood between Karmagirl teeth, count to three in her ear and with a whack, put her shoulder back. Karmagirl did a weird sound and closed her eye. Her breath start to become smoother, her head fell slowly, Ed sat on the crouch with her head on his thighs, he start to caress her blond hair while watching her sleeping. Now he could think, Sir Peter Maxwell's hit men wouldn't come back soon. He felt like being in the eye of the hurricane and he liked that...
Gem City used to be a very peaceful place, people were coming from far away to live there. The city has been set up from nothing by Draginol, following his vision to rule on an arena where people would suffer no limit to their freedom of speech. He worked hard to build the heaven of Gem City And for years, he succeed. A lot of philosophers came from all over the world and so the legend started, talker and listener were arguing without limits of any kind. The following prosperity started to attract a different type of immigrants. But, soon or later, the newly Lord Draginol would notice them and send them to exile without any way to ever come back.
Gem city was a sea city far north and the climate was temperate. With the passing decades, he could watch the city becoming larger, philosophers were talking and talking, the city become a big and influent shire, the lord crowned himself a king. Gem City was his precious jewel and his glitter blinded him so he didn't notice the danger coming from the rise of the temperature. He didn't realise the problem before the first attack of the Scandinavian penguin.

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